Get a Captivating LinkedIn Profile
Stand out in a sea of jargon and get the right people looking at your LinkedIn profile.
And then clicking and getting in touch. That IS why you’re on LinkedIn anyway, right?
Be honest: Do you read the LinkedIn profiles that read like a resume?
Psst: If yours is a cut and paste of your resume, no one’s reading either
Are you waiting to network to generate clients or applying for jobs because your current version doesn't reflect where you are?
Do you avoid posting on LinkedIn because you don’t want people looking at your profile?
Did you create your profile quickly 10 years ago because a boss told you to and haven’t touched it since?
Were you recently laid off and find yourself looking for a job for the first time in years?
Most people take their resume and cut and paste it into the LinkedIn summary. Then, they edit down to the pesky 2,600-character limit.
Your LinkedIn profile is not a resume.
It’s what sets you apart and makes a great first impression.
And you know a good LinkedIn profile when you see one.
It stands out in a sea of blue suits — even if your suit is business on top; party on the bottom.
A great LinkedIn profile gets attention, makes you click, read, scroll, and want to follow or connect. You can’t help it. You’re drawn in and you just have to know the person behind the profile.
Think about it, the LinkedIn profiles that captivate you sound different than most of the other ones you skim over.
A great LinkedIn profile will help you stand out.
Every time you look at your LinkedIn profile, though, you cringe. You check out other LinkedIn profiles in incognito mode, steal parts of their profile, write it in your own words, and then try to piece it all together.
You know it’s an important part of your personal and professional marketing strategy, but writing about yourself is hard.
While your LinkedIn profile sits there half-baked or looking exactly like everyone else’s, you’re missing out on opportunities and networking potential every day.
Your LinkedIn profile could tell the whole story about how amazing you are, highlight the best of your experience, and drive the right connections.
Imagine a LinkedIn profile that’s fresh, even fun, and speaks directly to your potential employers, clients, or connections. You’ll make a great first impression, getting you more views, connection requests, and clicks.
You’re so excited to show off your new LinkedIn profile that you add it to your email signature, and your business card. If you have a website, you finally add a link.
let’s fix your LinkedIn profile
Meet your LinkedIn profile writer…
I’m Jacq — a business writing coach for people who want to sound authentic while they make an impact on the world.
Before launching this copywriting and coaching business, I invested 13 years working in corporate communications and management-consulting for clients including telecom, Fortune 500 companies, and the US government.
I was the go-to LinkedIn profile editor in my corporate career and now I offer this to clients.
As a freelance writer, I’ve helped hundreds of clients — tech startups, life and business coaches, course creators, inventors, executives, finance leaders, and more — learn how to communicate more authentically and stand out in a busy online world.
I help you create a compelling LinkedIn profile that speaks directly to your potential clients, employers, and connections.
And it will sound and feel just like you.
Let’s take your Dull LinkedIn profile and turn it into your most powerful online connection tool.
With a clickable LinkedIn profile:
Your profile will tell a story — your story in a way that feels like your voice
You’ll be using plain English, avoiding forgettable and confusing business jargon
Your network will be impressed and be more likely to help you when you ask
You’ll get more profile views and increase your popularity in your network
Your LinkedIn inbox will be full of potential connections and clients — imagine the possibilities!
Whether you’re looking to grow your business, change jobs, or pivot to a new career, a great LinkedIn profile can help.
Hire me to write and edit your Compelling LinkedIn Profile.
Here’s what you get:
Getting inside your brain. You’ll answer some questions in an online form. This will give you helpful insights as you zone in on your professional voice and position yourself to build your online presence. You’ll probably learn a few things about yourself too.
A friendly internet-stalking. In a totally non-creepy way, with all the links and information you provide me, I’ll creep on all your (public) online profiles and review your resume (if you have one).
A head-turning LinkedIn headline that does its job. This is a searchable field and we’ll blend the right keywords with your personality to help it stand out and get clicks.
LinkedIn Summary. Once a reader clicks your headline, now we’ve got to keep them reading. We’ll get readers clicking your summary and looking for reasons to work with you or hire you.
Experience Edits. I’ll suggest edits to your experience and make recommendations based on your LinkedIn visibility strategy.
Use LinkedIn with a purpose. You’ll learn how, in just a few minutes a day to an hour a week, you can engage your network and be more visible on this powerful platform. Custom-fit to your professional goals to help you get seen. You’ll get a strategy that works for you and your life.
Standing out in a sea of starchy button-downs. All the little details that make you stand apart from the sea of jargon-filled sameness by highlighting the unique contribution that only you provide.
Optional Resume Refresh. If needed, I’ll update your resume (up to 3 pages) based on your LinkedIn profile updates.
Note: If your LinkedIn strategy includes manipulation and spamming strangers with sales pitches disguised as helping, this isn’t for you.
We’ll do this in record time. When we focus our writing efforts, you get a magnetic LinkedIn profile and can start fielding all the new direct messages you’ll attract in under two weeks.
Most clients start seeing the uptick in views, engagement, and messages right away.
Finally, have a LinkedIn profile you’re excited to show off.
Investment: $1200
How to get started:
Step 1. Click here to answer some questions and schedule a time to chat. We’ll hop on the phone, and we’ll chat about your professional goals and your purposes for using LinkedIn. If everything sounds great, you’ll get an agreement to sign along with instructions for a $400 deposit to reserve your start day. The rest of your payment - $800, is due the day before we begin.
Step 2: While you put your feet up, grab your favorite morning beverage, or maybe even just go to work, I’ll write your LinkedIn profile. You’ll pop open your shiny new words for your LinkedIn profile and tell me what you like and what you want to change. You’ll get edits back within 1-2 business days.
Step 3. You publish your totally done-for-you, jargon-free LinkedIn profile, sit back, and revel in your professional-ness. Then, I’ll take a final look when you publish to make sure everything flows and looks great.
Have questions? I’m happy to answer them. Send me an email at hi@jacquelinefisch.com.
These people love their LinkedIn profiles now
“I had been putting off my About page and LinkedIn profile for over a year. It was (seemingly) impossible for me to write about myself in a way that felt comfortable. Jacq helped me craft a page that not only tells my story in a way I'm proud of, but also converts to sales. I sold 3 courses just 2 days after updating the copy without any marketing!” - Stacey H
“I have benefited greatly from the LinkedIn content Jacq wrote for me. The copy is helpful and the process opened my eyes to how to present myself with confidence and a bit of sassy! And you've helped me find the fun in writing, which has made all the difference. To use an old proverb... not only did you "give me a fish" with the copy you wrote, you also "taught me to fish" by helping me tap into my intuitive writing, which will feed me for a lifetime.” - Melissa M
"I hired Jacq to write my LinkedIn profile and resume, and now my copy is so much clearer. She brought out my voice, and now my online professional presence is a more accurate reflection of who I am (and not stiff!) I was even able to repurpose my LinkedIn copy for other parts of my website. Jacq is incredibly talented, knows her craft, and is quick, fun, and easy to work with. She's a straight shooter which I appreciate—she rocks!" - Pia J
“I found Jacq through a colleague that worked with her and had spectacular feedback to share. I hesitated to engage as I was looking for 1-to-1 high-touch collaboration on specific deliverables and less continuous writing.
Don’t think about it, just ACT. Jacq is a true partner, sharp, real, talented, clear, resourceful, calm — an expert. She'll instantly turn your shitty first draft into delicious words that roll off your tongue and engage your audience. We are meant to laser focus on our special talents or else we are the jack (jack not jacq) of all trades and master at none.
Jacq’s special talent is how to help you shape words in a powerful way to capture your essence and audience.” - Karen M
“I'd never worked with a writer before, so I wasn't sure what to expect. I also teach teachers how to teach writing, so I wondered if I actually needed help with copy. Jacq taught me so much! I now have a clearer vision and message for my business, and I can write simple newsletters and blog posts that my people enjoy! I'm more confident in my online writing, and I even have a sales plan — and I thought I didn't need one! She's friendly, responsive, and easy to work with — and whenever I'm not sure about a sentence, she somehow pulls out three other options of how to say it. I definitely recommend working with Jacq! She's the best, and I'm glad we get to continue to collaborate.” - Dahlia D
“Jacq is amazing. She's an intuitive, kind, and supportive coach and is gifted at her craft. She helped me pull incoherent, rambling posts, brainstorms and snippets into a cohesive, powerful story.
She read more than my mind — she read my intention and was able to translate it into copy that deeply resonates with my why and my how. I felt that finally, someone got what I was trying to say. She gave me hope and helped refine my message.
The whole experience, not just the amazing words, has catalyzed this entire next chapter I'm now living in my business. I am grateful and proud to have worked with Jacq and highly and without reservation recommend her.” - Tarah K